The Bottle.

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55379
United States
44° 44' 24.9648" N, 93° 31' 14.0304" W

Sitting all alone.
Thinking it may be your last night.
The phone rings but you can’t talk without a slur.
You cry because you can’t take think without a kink.
You had smiling people around – how can you feel so alone?
In the end, all you have is a liquid friend.
And you my friend are a liquid fiend.
Now can you see?

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