The Bottle
Looking out at the wavy sea
Feel the sea air cover me
On the horizon, the sun is setting
Peaceful after today's fish-netting
But wait, there's a shape on a wave
Drifting out of a giant sea cave
It grows bigger as it nears
Going so slow, it almost jeers
I finally snatch it out of the ocean
Swiping it up in one big motion
It's a bottle with a note inside
Scarcely damaged by the tide
I take out the message and open it up
Beside me waiting is my faithful pup
I almost recognize the script
On the rock, I almost slipped
"Take me away from these awful chores,
My life is full of many bores"
Looking back on my childhood life
One memory strikes like a knife
I came to the sea many years ago
Back when I thought my parents were foe
Just because they made me work
I thought of them as one big jerk
But they loved me, now I know
Once I grew up, I realized so
I cast a message in this bottle
Doing it I did not dawdle
I never thought it would end up here
The chances are a little queer
I put the note back and looked at the foam
Then turned back around, and I went home
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