Brainstorming
At times it is a breeze
Magnolia scented, somehow caressing
Guiding at a languorous pace
No more than a pleasant drift
Through the seascape that is my thoughts
While others it is a tempest
Overcast and smelling of ozone
Swaths of lightning its herald
To flee is the only sensible response
Lest something unsightly occur
The ship has no navigator
Yet the captain still yells his orders
Ever steadfast and stoic
Foolishly still under the impression he commands
As if will alone could move this vessel
Realization comes with each days dawn
My life is that of a passenger
Struggling to maintain his sanity
Be it a pleasure cruise or a voyage damned
I am ever at the mercy of the wind
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