Breaking Down

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84074
United States
40° 35' 29.9436" N, 112° 18' 35.7624" W

I'm breaking down I don't know where to go,

I'm laying here on this old broken road.

I'm staring up at the cloudless sky,

holding back tears, from these swollen eyes.

I'm hurt, I'm scared, I don't know what to do,

I'm playing back memories, from when I was with you.

my heart is beside me like shattered glass,

just one cut and ill bleed to fast.

this pain in my chest it aches so bad,

I'm so lost i feel so sad.

help me find out who it is I am?

or I just might find myself doing this all over again.

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