Breaking Free

Thu, 05/02/2013 - 23:20 -- mak003

Location

55113
United States
45° 0' 44.2188" N, 93° 9' 50.5908" W

>I just want to run
to the end of the world
I just have to run
Stop this mind twirl
>my mind set -just let me go
clear up the fog that surrounds
my mind hurts -there's too much I know
need to relieve the weight and shed the pounds
>so many things I never and need to get done
lists pile up into a irremediable calamity
i just need to run
to escape from my sanity
> I just plan for the day
and next thing I know I'm blindsided
so I'm throwing down my glory and going away
which turn to take -I haven't decided
>where did this urge come from
I really don't know
I've seen whta this town's become
and I just hae to go
>I want to break to loose
run over it all
and trample the bugs with no excuse
yet I'm afraid to fall

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