Breaking Point
I can't say one thing!
Not one damn thing, without you criticizing me!
Just shut up!
You ask what I mean,
I mean Im Fed Up!
You push me for my 'own good',
Well kudos, you're a parent,
You should.
But when is to much?
When I drive to a hill, close my eyes,
And let go of the clutch?
Im taking your phone, you're groun-
BE QUIET!
ENOUGH IS ENOUGH!
Im tired of trying to please you
Im giving up!
Doing what?
I SAID I'M GIVING UP!
You're unsatisfiable,
So keep trying for what?
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