Like a breath of cold air

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Like a breath of cold air, i am lonely with fear,this pain i feel ,i just can't bear,it is painful enough to kill,ones fragile heart,Like a breath of cold air,to repair the heart,that was taken apart,by one careless words,by me taking out this blade,to cut myself when i hid in the shade,it will take more than a decade,to fix this heart,broken apart,by this cold spade, Like a breath of cold air.

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