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A Breath of Fresh Air


I open the door as the bold frosty air lightly caresses my face

 

I take a first step as my heel says Good Morning to the Earth

 

I wallow in the first adolescent rays of the sun and sky

 

My body embracing the refreshing misty chill

 

As the early spring dew glistens on the lush green of the forest

 

I finally commence on the voyage to my grandmothers

 

My path is long and narrow but I mustn't stray

 

The forceful river in all of it's beauty

 

The luscious mighty trees swaying before the commanding winds

 

The elegant butterfly whose wings flutter with great fervor

 

The mighty wolf striding with glorious prestige

 

Every step makes my body tremble with pure bliss

 

As I consume the pure charm of nature

 

The alluring bouquet of stunning flowers seizes all my senses

 

The aroma sweet

 

The majestic hue

 

The soft glistening flowers that captures my gaze

 

My body cannot ignore this fierce enchantment that has been cast upon me

 

As I take a sheepish step toward the bewildering beauty

 

My wary sight sharply averts to the wolf

 

No longer is the wolf's gaze noble

 

But fierce eyes that bore into my soul

 

My gentle eyes now brimming with distraught

 

My mind inflamed with fear

 

My body heavy as lead

 

I try to speak but all I can muster are 3 merciful last word...

 

“I’m sorry Grandma”

 

As I take in my last breath I can only be grateful,

 

Grateful that my last breath was a breath of fresh air.  


 

Be wary of all things pleasant to the body, for they are often disastrous to the soul.


 

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