Breath-Taking
You have a way of taking my breath from me.
Like when you turn the car too fast
or stay silent on the phone for too long
or run a red light with me in the front seat.
But you also take my breath away
When you laugh your belly laugh
that sounds like a timpani drum
and a symphony
and a child
all at once.
When you hug me so tight my lungs can’t fully expand,
and they feel like balloons that are too big for my ribcage and
when those iron bars that hold my lungs
also keep the bird that is my heart from flying away
because without my heart,
my blood would be sadly under-oxygenated
and in a far less literal sense,
I wouldn’t be able to love you without it.
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