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Brighter day


Met this girl on whisper/ for some reason I couldn't just leave and forget her/ days going by/ she's still glued to my mind/ like crazy right/ never had this feeling deep inside to the point where I wish she was mine/ called me baby/ I was shocked/ thinking time locked in its place/ her face runs through my brain at every place I turn/ my smiles not upside down anymore/ I just got done closing a door to a relationship/ figured that was it/ then pops in the beautiful kitten/ that's what she was for Halloween/ so I've been dying and itching to see her/ wonder what she's thinking on a regular basis/ is it my face that she replaced with all the sadness she says has/ my true intention is to be the guy she never had/ I'm so glad I ran into this girl/ realizing now what it means to say she may be my world/ my girl/ through this swirls of misfits/ dumb tricks/ slick chicks thinking they can get away with anything cause of their " so called " thickness shaped like a toothpick/ that's not what makes my clock tick/ but pardon my language / I ain't thinking with my dick/ when I'm texting/ chatting with this kitten/ I have no secret agenda with her/ I'm just trying to be the last guy that could up as her forever " thought I'd never see a brighter day But that's exactly how see things when she's texting me Thought I'd never find a better way To finally have all this anger and depression released " So what if I sound whip/ better than rolling around with clueless chicks/ I'll save my pick for when a person is really worth it/ that's what I found with this one/ people say you're too young to fall in love/ to them I say is that what you believed when you were 23 / talking about a 16 year relationship at 16/ now your 32 / I got 7 years of mentality technically before saying this out loud before you/ so what if you have knowledge/ I got some thoughts that would make your nightmares seem soft/ don't get me wrong I ain't trying to diss/ but when you say no offense/ I'll take it as it is/ and return it with a smart remark/ I'm just happy someone shined a bright light in my dark heart"
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