BROKEN BOTTLES IN THE SANDS OF TIME
See me here
Stumbling down the street
The rain's pouring down
I'm staring at my feet
My feet is but wet
Due to my tears and not the rain
They're salty and crimson stained
from my agonizing pain
I raise my bloodstained eyes
To see the sickle shaped moon
She replies me:
Son, how is life's journey so far?
I wanted to leave footprints
On the sands of time
But little did I know
They were broken bottles in the sands of time
I felt a sharp pain
Each time I took a step
I came crashing on the scraps by the roadside
For my frail legs could not bear the pain
I now realise
That life itself is truly a bed of thorns
And those who excel
have nothing but a coat of iron
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