Broken Hearted Daughter
Its 11:55 right now and i began to think to myself why?
Why me? Why now?
I work blood sweat an tears and do not know the reason why?
Why does she lie? Why now?
My hands get weak when i think of this situation,
I think to myself why? Why me? Why now?
Both parties have been decieving, this tears my heart apart.
Never have I ever been this hurt before
Maybe more so hurt because its my MOTHER
My 10th grade year it hurts so bad....
I think to myself why? Why me? Why now?
I reconcile with myself and say everything happens for a reason....
But then I think about the sneaky coversations and the late night out
Why now? I feel as though im working myself into this dark hole where no one cares.
Especially my MOTHER,
Controllig and self centered
She talks on te phone and says....
" I cant come over tonight, its too cold"
But did she ever think about whats going on in her own household again I say
Why? What is really going on?
Im hurt broken into two
- Brokn Hearted Daughter
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Deeply personal betrayal by mother; minimal abstract reflection.
Multiple emotional ideas layered densely; repetition intensifies idea frequency.
Overwhelmingly negative; betrayal, hurt, broken-heartedness dominate throughout.
Urgent questioning, raw capitalization, passionate voice convey high intensity.
Approximately 25-28 lines; falls within 16-30 line range.
Minimal figures; mostly declarative statements with one metaphor (dark hole).
Pure lyric internal voice; introspective monologue; no dramatic personas.
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