Broken Thoughts

by S.J. Hernandez

January 22, 2014

1. Look At ME,

I've CHANGED,

Can't You SEE?

Ever Since That TRAGEDY, I Shot Up With A "BANG"!!!!

2. Trapped In My Own Personal HELL,

SCARS Up & Down My ARM, Acting As My Guards

How? How Could've FELL?

Looking Back, I've Come So FAR

3. She SAVED ME,

Built Me UP,

Helped REMAKE Me,

From That, I JUMPED Out Of The Darkness

Finally, Now, After So LONG,

These BROKEN THOUGHTS..........Are GONE

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Comments (3)

S.J. HernandezJun 11, 2014

Thanks! Don't forget to checck out my other poems as well

savigirl14Jun 11, 2014

This is a good poem. I love the message of how you have changed and you are remade. Keep writing and brainstorming new ideas. Please read my poems and tell me what you think

MVP-Most Valuable PoetJan 23, 2014

modify this poem in a different formatdont listjust write freelycome up with a word and let it flow naturallyi like the idea behind this poemkeep building