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brother love


i first met her in the third grade

my heart melted when i first layed eyes on you i wanted to be her bae

we became closer everyday you made me love crazy my heart wanted more of you

years flew by we were closer than ever my heart was like a crater waiting to be filled by your love

she had my emotions drunk on her and she had me on strings like a puppet

then finally one day i had the courage to ask her out but i was fighting with myself

with all these thoughts racing through my mind then i locked all of my thoughts in a cage

blinded by love i went to go and pick her up for a movie date

i knocked on her door full of confidence  till i saw my brother open the door at that moment

all my thoughts broke out there cage

and then told me why she was close to me all these years

from that moment my heart started to crack. 

 

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fatu jr fatu
<p>true story bro</p>

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