brother love
i first met her in the third grade
my heart melted when i first layed eyes on you i wanted to be her bae
we became closer everyday you made me love crazy my heart wanted more of you
years flew by we were closer than ever my heart was like a crater waiting to be filled by your love
she had my emotions drunk on her and she had me on strings like a puppet
then finally one day i had the courage to ask her out but i was fighting with myself
with all these thoughts racing through my mind then i locked all of my thoughts in a cage
blinded by love i went to go and pick her up for a movie date
i knocked on her door full of confidence till i saw my brother open the door at that moment
all my thoughts broke out there cage
and then told me why she was close to me all these years
from that moment my heart started to crack.
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