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Buzzing with no negotiatians

by muizz (Mark)

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Bears are humble creatures That strike a deal with bees for honey What does biology and history teaches Did the negotiation have anything to do with money They say bears are hungry but quiet when they slumber What about citizen Bees who's without honey so have to hunger Will the bears admit they blunder Or do bees need to give into their recent affiliated prey Bees have no integrated intention to sting But when interfered theyd need to let go Of a body part that the circle of life thing Made to accept so woe Bees know how to fight But they vulnerability has given them no right Bears are to be proven to like integration But bees seek no intention
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allusionmetaphorrepetitionidentitynaturepersonificationspiritualfree verse

muizz (Mark)

Im a seventeen year old who had a passion for writing since the 4th grade I thought it was going to take me somewhere seeing that I was the only boy who couldn't play sports who was born with a soft soft voice and remains misunderstood I have spent my childhood trying to escape every comer of it yet still I have gotten nowhere I still have big dream like making children's dream come true and going to America

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Blend of concrete animal behavior and abstract meditations on coexistence, power dynamics.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple interconnected ideas per stanza; philosophical questioning throughout creates density.

DarkSentimentBright

Melancholic tone; explores vulnerability, sacrifice, conflict; some resigned acceptance present.

StillEnergyExplosive

Questioning, reflective voice; occasional intensity but primarily meditative and exploratory pace.

MicroLengthEpic

16 lines; falls in mid-length range (16-30 lines category).

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Uses metaphor (negotiation, circle of life), personification, some ornament; mostly direct language.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Predominantly lyric internal questioning; minimal narrative or dramatic persona shifts.

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