Cafe-Goer's Lament

by Ravyn LaRue

July 2, 2013

Look at you- spiking my coffee again.

You’re lucky- I like you enough not to mind.

Just don’t put coconut in, or I’ll never be able to talk to you again.

But right now, I love you a lot.

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QVOct 31, 2013

<p>I adore the simplicity of your poem! The scene and dialogue seem very realistic. I must also comment on the original title.  Keep on writing and sharing :) Q.V.</p>