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California


Can I be all the way honest or sorta? Im not just another NewYorker that wants so badly to go California but yea it's this chick there thatd make a Christian stare.. At Medusa and pardon me i kno you're used to Dudes focused on You like a tutor but see me im different, I kno youve heard that before show me a girl that hasn't but the proof is in the pudding and im Bill Cosby my game is a lil sloppy see Because I don't chase much most of these chicks are straight smuts that cause distractions on a road to success I present to u mediocrity that's why I accept the rejection you want to see something different so I present to You Christian Simply more mediocrity at first glance but I blew the first chance and they say you only give one shot because you're dumb hot and everybody wants you, thats the truth So I'm in the booth hoping to catch your attention Ignoring u seems to be the path I come straight forward and you laugh Did I meet my thirst quota? Is my open desire for you the reason why you give me the cold shoulder? California I hear you're so warm I see you're so pretty I'm just a young kid with Dreams from a big city, I play a lot my sense of humor is out there but when I want something I work hard for it California you aren't a big fan of small talk Like imagine us walking on the boardwalk it is lame to you so what arranges u? What catches ur eye ?what keeps your attention? I wanted you since I saw you and I've been wanting I since then.
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jwiener
It is so cool how you wrote about California as if it were a person you were talking to, and how you started off the poem with a question. If you like writing about what you see, check out "poetry writing tips" for your surroundings under the "resources" section!

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