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Can you hear me breaking?


No one understands what I see

not even me 

I feel stronger with you 

but you break me to amuse you

Its hard to leave 

but you're no good for me

I thought we could last forever

Im just glad I found out sooner rather than later

You were my heart and my soul

But now my heart has gone cold

You were my first real love 

You were the thing my heart was most proud of

but I can't do this anymore 

I'm shattering right to my core

You're gone now 

I've never heard a heart break so loud

I thought you were my fix 

but you just broke me down brick by brick 

I'll love you forever and want you for always

because the one who loves the most always pays

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Usmgirl11
<p>if anyone has any advice for bettering my poetry please help</p>

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