Canary
There's a little canary flying around my room
Wings of red and black are invisible at speed
It perched on my bedside table as a child
And when I reached to grab it’s little wings
it flew at me, screaming and pecked at my eyes
The canary’s song wakes me in the morning
Sweet voice calling out foreign notes in shrill song
It perches itself on my shoulder without question
But I stay still and sing the robin’s song instead
Little canary, always there when I sleep
Gentler now, older and tame
You caress my hair and befriend my sheets
But I flinch when your feathers brush my skin
I’ll let you follow me around
But I cannot hold you in my hand
I never really could, you know
You’re invisible to the girl you’ve blinded
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Personal trauma with abstract metaphorical dimensions about control, fear, invisibility.
Multiple layered ideas per section: childhood trauma, present entanglement, emotional ambivalence.
Predominantly negative: violence, fear, flinching, blindness; tempered by gentle moments.
Intense moments (screaming, pecking, flinching) balanced by quiet reflection and stillness.
Approximately 18 lines; falls in 16-30 line range.
Rich metaphor of canary as trauma/obsession; personification, symbolic imagery throughout.
Pure lyric internal voice; speaker processing personal emotional experience directly.
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