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Canary


There's a little canary flying around my room 

Wings of red and black are invisible at speed

It perched on my bedside table as a child

And when I reached to grab it’s little wings

it flew at me, screaming and pecked at my eyes 

 

The canary’s song wakes me in the morning 

Sweet voice calling out foreign notes in shrill song 

It perches itself on my shoulder without question 

But I stay still and sing the robin’s song instead

 

Little canary, always there when I sleep 

Gentler now, older and tame 

You caress my hair and befriend my sheets

But I flinch when your feathers brush my skin 

 

I’ll let you follow me around 

But I cannot hold you in my hand

I never really could, you know 

You’re invisible to the girl you’ve blinded 

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal trauma with abstract metaphorical dimensions about control, fear, invisibility.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple layered ideas per section: childhood trauma, present entanglement, emotional ambivalence.

DarkSentimentBright

Predominantly negative: violence, fear, flinching, blindness; tempered by gentle moments.

StillEnergyExplosive

Intense moments (screaming, pecking, flinching) balanced by quiet reflection and stillness.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 18 lines; falls in 16-30 line range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphor of canary as trauma/obsession; personification, symbolic imagery throughout.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; speaker processing personal emotional experience directly.

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