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candle wax


in the crimson and gold, 

you burn the brightest,

the stories you've told,

left me ignited.

 

the flame flickers and cracks,

don't leave at dawn.

i light the candle wax,

but you're still gone.

 

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ladyconstellation
<p>im sorry for responding so late!!! pls you are so sweet n considerate???? this made my entire year??? you&#39;re so magical thank you for this???? &lt;3</p>
quietwhispersinthewind
<p>hi, i already commented on one of your poems but I just want to reiterate you are so good. Your storytelling, vocabulary and imagery are breathtaking.</p>

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