Can't Breath
Why do I suffer?
Why do I hide?
Why do I stay silent to this?
I could never reach your approval.
Why do I even try?
Why do I bother with you?
This place is so negative that I cant breath. You are suffocating me.
Suffocating me.
Why do I suffer?
Why do I hide?
Why do I stay silent to this?
Why should I even try for you?
Date: 4/05/2006
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Ever since I was young writing was the key in my life to express myself with or without anyone's knowledge. Most of the poems are based on my past or just simple things that go through my mind. I have dreams of succeeding in life, and maybe I can finally have a chance to succeed with my writing. I am also sorry if my poems bring up certain emotions to anyone who views them. The past is the past and not matter how good or bad they were it would have not made me the strong person I am today. I hope you Enjoy my writing. And I also hope to enjoy your reviews. -D.P.
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