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Captive


The lion in its metal cage Has a chain around its neck Snarls at visitors Because its miserable And even though it is trapped It keeps hope to find a way out Of this life Of this system It preaches anger and rebellion The dove lands in my window It sings its melancholy song It is lonely But at peace Its hope lies in someone feeding it It doesn't want to be a captive The dove preaches safety and adventure What do I do? Who do I follow? I walk every day I smile at people They frown back Or they smile back I don't want to be a captive But what if I'm a captive In my own life?
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rose345

I am a student in a rural Midwest town. I hope someday to be a lawyer or a psychologist. Remember to always live life to the fullest because you never know where life will take you. Be the light! Leave a comment if my poem meant something to you☀

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Blends personal conflict with abstract philosophical questions about freedom versus captivity.

SparseMeasureDense

Moderate density; explores three distinct ideas—lion, dove, speaker—with breathing room between sections.

DarkSentimentBright

Predominantly melancholic and conflicted; some hope present but overshadowed by existential doubt.

StillEnergyExplosive

Restrained intensity; snarling and rebellion imagery balanced by contemplative questioning tone.

MicroLengthEpic

Twenty-one lines falls in the 16-30 range; moderate length with clear structural sections.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Strong metaphorical framework; lion and dove as symbols for contrasting life philosophies; personification.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Begins lyric internal, transitions to dramatic monologue; speaker queries external voices before introspection.

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