Caress

by Sno

December 14, 2020

Caress me like you mean it, baby

Don't stop

The judgement of your hand to my body is merciful and sweet

Too hot

I need your love and your love needs me

Intertwined

You whisper sweet nothings and painful somethings to my heart

Slowed time

Please be here ever and for always

Kissy face

Leave me only in ecstasy

Sweetest place

I love you and your heart loves me

Engaged

To share your soft love with me, baby

So brave

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Comments (2)

SnoDec 15, 2020

<p>lol,thx for the heads up. Appreciate it. </p>

OvercomerDec 14, 2020

<p>Not bad, however, I believe you meant "my" instead of "me" in the 7th line? I do the same thing all the time thoough, I've probably done it in a few of my poems, lol.</p>