Carwash
I stared at the soap suds that fell upon the tarnished
vehicles, its reflective sight a depiction of endless
snow falling from the foggy sky, how it displayed
an array of hues across its surface, the way the colors
seemed to fade into each other, the way the water splashed
onto the wet pavement illuminated my soul. I could see
the various people spraying their soiled vehicles down,
one strolling back and forth eyeing the exterior view of her
car, two pointing the spray gun at their dull, windshield wipers,
until its surface became a crystal-clear frame, some scrubbing
and washing, then washing and scrubbing the sticky mud stains
on their lifeless tires, working their sponges strenuously,
as their discolored tires begun to sparkle again. Others dashed
around their cars and trucks in circular motions, power washing
the grime stuck in the groove of their mud guards, their faces
and clothes drenched with sweat. Across from them, I could see
a few vacuuming and polishing the inside of their vehicles to a
spotless shine, while they stepped back and admired its amazing beauty.
I looked at the guys bent down at their rims, dipping their rags continually
in the chrome polish, then cleaning their rims to a dazzling radiance.
When they were finished, they hopped into their rides and drove off
down the scenic landscape blasting heavy beats, as people marveled
at their flashy rims and stunning cars. I inhaled the captivating sight all
around me and thought to myself, “This is the place where everyone comes
to restore their beauty and feel brand new again.
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