Catcher

Location

60586
United States
41° 34' 21.5616" N, 88° 13' 53.4468" W

And there was you
And there was me
And I fell back
And when I was caught,
I was caught over
And over again,
And it was beautiful
I tell you
It was beautiful

And It wasn't win
Or lose.
It was catch me
Cuz I can't catch
Myself.

And when you caught me,
You caught all of me.
My favorite lies, you caught those too.

But the strange thing was
I did not know I was falling.
I never knew I was falling,
Until you caught me.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

whoever it was that caught you wanted to know who you are
very expressive in your thoughts
"But the strange thing was
I did not know I was falling.
I never knew I was falling,
Until you caught me." was the driving point i saw in your poem
i encourage you to keep writing
do you have nay more poems? i'm a power poetry mentor

you_wish94

Thanks. And yeah, I have a lot more. Maybe I'll post later this week. 

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