Change

by marcusculbert

February 12, 2014

Change.. the great mediator of life,

Eye constantly ask myself what could eye change and how?

Often to stumble upon the question "what couldnt eye change?"

This simple negation opens realms suppressed in the darkness of my mind.

Opportunities that eye would have otherwise omitted were illuminated by thought.

Any and everything is subject to change,

The only difference eye would like to see is in our understanding.

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thisispoetryprojectApr 7, 2014

I like this poem and really love the visual that you attached to it. They complement each other so well. My confusion is in your use of "eye". On one hand, it seems like you are purposely using "eye' rather than "I" to get the reader to notice that changing a perspective can change the world, however, you don't make any mention of this, nor do you offer any hints. Overall, line 4 is my favorite. :)