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Change my ways 4 you


You better not tell me what I owe, when all I've done is proven myself more than twice. The trends always come and go but all humans have their flaws. Beauty is supposed to come in any form from boy to girl and all those in between those flaws. Was I never enough I was giving you all my love is my body just not enough? All you want is these poses that make me feel like I'm tied up in a knot. It'll soon be summer and I'll be posting my cute pics while I'll bet no one will look at my face and look at everything other than that since my love isn't ever enough. I'll be laying out in my bikini and as pass times that's all everyone will be looking at, and my best friend's boyfriend liked my pic this time. You expect me to be this blow-up doll and expect me to be fun, but what the fuck am I out of luck I guess my ass just isn't fat enough, since you'll hear how I'll talk to you and defend my performance you'll turn around and walk away since my body isn't what I'm showing but it's okay because now you'll never see me the same.
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal struggles with body image, self-worth, objectification in relationships.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple interconnected ideas: validation, beauty standards, sexual objectification, emotional exhaustion.

DarkSentimentBright

Predominantly bitter, frustrated, exhausted; self-directed anger and deep hurt throughout.

StillEnergyExplosive

Aggressive rhetorical questions, profanity, rapid-fire accusations create high kinetic intensity.

MicroLengthEpic

Six stanzas of varying length, approximately 24 lines total; mid-range poem.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Blow-up doll metaphor, tied-up-in-knot simile, some figurative language but largely declarative.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric first-person internal monologue; introspective voice addressing unnamed others directly.

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