Chapter one (Cinquain)

by jfantauzzi13

October 17, 2012

Mature Unfurl new wings, Anxious to taste freedom, Yet afraid to take the first leap, Adult

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samueltfranklinNov 21, 2012

Yep, that's pretty much a good summation of growing up; being eager to take on the future, but simultaneously fearing the hell out of it. A universal feeling boiled down to a few succinct lines--well done.