CHASIN THE SUN

by lessyveevee

January 29, 2020

Mark went to Europe on a love scholaship

all of us wished him a marvelous trip.

If he thought he had troubles before,

look at him now he got two dozen more.

One of those bright young men

runnin out after the fun.

Charles moved out of his coldwater flat

and into a penthouse.can you picture that?

If he thoutgh he had sorrows before

look at him now he got two dozen more.

One of those bright young men

runnin out after the fun.

One of those bright young men chasin the sun

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lessyveeveeJan 30, 2020

Hae thea am humble that you like my poem.their is nothing good like inspiring someone and giving them hope that they can make it.thanks alot

TimothyLyallJan 29, 2020

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