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The Child and the Youth


 

The Child

Look at the way she talks: so crude

She walks like a model but looks like a fool

She tainted herself: was so pure.

Look at her; I don't recognize her anymore.

 

She had such maturity

Had such little care for the unimportant things

She gave her all into everything

She was going to be special someday

 

She was going to show those

that tease me

How being different is a good thing

How being emotional makes me a human being

 

But now she is a stranger to me

 

The Youth

Look at the way she lets them push her around

She walks with a skip and looks childish

She ruins herself; could be so popular

Look at her; I don’t recognize her anymore

 

She’s changed; doesn’t cry anymore.

She even has more friends than she would have before

Why can’t she appreciate the change

Why not let the past stay

She was constantly sad all of the time

Resolved herself to being hated for no crime

Those people made her change her mind

Psychologically damaged she can’t see

 

They will no longer get the best of me

 

The Child

I’m worse than before!

So what is this change for?

 

The Youth

To make me feel wanted a little more

 

The Child

Is feeling accepted worth losing who you are?

 

The Youth

It's too late; I don’t know who I am anymore

 
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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I wish to make a definition of myself</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I wish to put who I am into words others may understand</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I wish to have this ability</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">But no few words can define me </span></span></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I can better be &nbsp;described with verbs rather than nouns and pronouns</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I show and don&rsquo;t tell unless it helps for you to understand what I am saying</span></span></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I give and don&rsquo;t ask for things back but then sometimes end up empty-handed</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I hold on to opinions because they are how I&rsquo;ve shaped myself since the 5th grade</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I cry on the inside because, either way, it&rsquo;s a fleeting pain</span></span></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I remember my young self and the need for compassion</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I think about how I am now and see nothing much has changed</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I feel self-involved and selfish because I barely effectively communicate</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I think of how 17 years practiced imperfection will bring on some hate</span></span></p><p><br />&nbsp;</p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I rarely pray to God about these these things because they seem quite petty</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">But when I have thoughts of my constant mistakes they are often more than I can take</span></span></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I think sanely therefore I am but I allow others to define my own feelings</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I breath steady so I know I am alive but..</span></span></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I am not living</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I am not happy</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I am not satisfied</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I am not stable </span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I am not who I am meant to be but a combination of critics and hurt feelings</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-31998275-dd78-5e90-f9c0-aebb9d7b0f39"><span style="font-size: 14.6667px; font-family: Arial; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: transparent;">I am not me!</span></span></p><div>&nbsp;</div>

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