Cinderella Rewritten
This fairytale starts
like many others.
A tortured young girl.
An evil step-mother.
She was made to clean
most every day.
In the house
she had to stay.
Over time the labor
took its toll.
The girl wanted her life,
she wanted control.
Then came the ball,
that night sealed her fate.
She could not attend,
fairy godmother was late.
The next day came with a storm,
lightning flashed and thunder clapped.
And in Cinderella’s mind
something had snapped.
“I want freedom!”
Cried the thoughts in her head.
“And if they won’t give it to me”
“I’ll take it instead.”
Then she took a knife
and one sister was slain.
The other was burned.
Her step-mother, filleted.
And with their bones
she fashioned a crown.
“I am queen!” she said
“All of you bow down!”
In a lake of blood
filled with demented bliss
she vowed to bring the wicked
the reaper’s kiss.
Then she took to the night
all clad in black.
Running faster and farther
she never looked back.
She never married a prince
or had a royal life.
Instead she kills crime
while dealing with strife.
That’s Cinderella’s story.
Remastered, retold.
Driven insane and her enemies
died by her knife blade, cold.
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