PoemsBrowse PoemsSlamsFresh DropEchoes
LearnWriting TipsPoetry TermsPoets & ArtistsBooksFor Teachers
ExplorePoetry GenomePoem MapEchoesTake ActionGroups
AboutWrite a PoemDonateSign UpLog In

Circling Rose Petals


First loves are like rose petals

Each one circles around like water in a drain

You believe that loving them is inevitable

It does not matter the amount of pain

 

There goes one petal

When they say something not so nice

You're hurt, you hate them, but you don't give up

You just reroll your dice

 

The second petal lowers to its death

A true love like this won't blow up without a fight

First loves are evanescent

They're the last thing you think about at the end of each night

 

This is the third, fourth, fifth, sixth, and seventh petal

So many hurtful memories yet your love is everlasting

Forever forgiving is greatest flaw to obtain

Out from your chest your heart is blasting

 

You're left with the stem and what sits on top

By this time the relationship is gone

Moving on is like pushing a ton of lead

You're left with nothing, simply nothing to act on

©All Rights Reserved

Something wrong with this poem?

Share

Replies are closed for this poem.

Your Poem's Voice

See what makes your poem unique — its voice, energy, themes, and the literary traditions it draws from.

Comments (0)

No comments yet. Be the first to share your thoughts.

Log in to leave a comment.