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Climbing


The mountains loom above the little town.

The sun sets and they cast their shadows down.

The climber, still suspended from the rocks,

Clips in, makes sure the carabiner locks,

 

Takes one step up then one step up again.

"I'm off belay!" she calls down to her friend.

She builds an anchor, tosses down the rope.

This is the time she will allow some hope

 

That maybe, somehow, she will climb the wall,

Be strong enough to climb and then stand tall

Above the place she's lived so many years

And, looking down, to finally face her fears.

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kb97

I haven't written much poetry so if you have any suggestions please let me know. I'm 21. I'm about to start college again after dropping out twice. I will be majoring in Public Service with a focus on Nonprofit Management. If you have questions about something I write or just about me in general go ahead and ask. If you're worried it's too personal ask anyway (except full name, address, or other potentially identifying information). If I don't want to answer I'll let you know. Thanks for reading my poems! :)

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kb97
This was actually for an English assignment but I liked it enough to put it on here

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