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You were giving up on life and I wanted to show you the light, you were walking on stones with your head held high, I was dragging you along begging you to stay strong, cause without you everything would just feel wrong. It kills me to know that you feel so down, and even when you do you dont  wear a frown, I wanted to save you but I didnt know how. You said you didnt know how much more of this you could take, and i knew then why they called it "heart break." You were tired of being fake for everyone elses sake, tired of pretending to be someone you ain't. And even down to our very last days you layed next to me and told me you would never forget the way, it felt to be so empty and full of love all at once. Today  your gone but our never ending bond will always live on and on
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Vakiya Glaspie

Poems from the heart that some how glided out on paper and came alive. Im just a highschool girl that writes with everything in my being it would mean the absolute most for feedback good or bad. Thank you.

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Kkallas
<p>I saw your comment on my poem and had to go read yours! This is a beautiful poem and you should definitely keep writing. Good job, you have a way with words!</p>

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