Closer to It
I paused,
Then moved closer to an old oak.
I was twelve years old.
Another step,
Morning sun
Saw to flaring arms.
I was fourteen.
Fourth step,
Time froze all,
An endless void.
I was fifteen.
Fifth step,
Bitter ice melted.
The sun setted,
And branches trembled.
I was sixteen.
Sixth step,
Storms raged
And paths disintegrated.
Nigh tall,
I sunk into blindness.
I was seventeen.
Seventh step,
Slow going.
Fortunate appendages survived,
Anticipating sunrise
And my sight renewed.
I am to be eighteen years old.
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