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Colorado in Spring


I stand stationary 
A storm approaching 
The world around me moves 
Trapped in a vegetative valley 
Voluntarily imprisoned by resting mountains and endless sky 
Sky 
Stretching further than eyes can see 
Nature 
Encapsulating more beauty than minds can process 
Mountains meet atmosphere in a chilling embrace 
They escape harsh winds with thick blankets of untouched snow 
Deep emerald evergreens proudly tower in the valley where I stand 
Less confident, browning shrubs dot the middle of the mountain range 
Plants that chose to plant their seeds at the top weren’t so lucky 
No life prevails on the unforgiving peaks. 
A powerful stream rushes through the valley 
Small yet resilient yellow wildflowers hug the edge of the rushing water 
Cherishing its gift of hydration 
The clear rapids carry fish 
Unwilling hitchhikers 
Down the valley without consideration of their desired destination The dark gray sky twists furiously above 
Clouds move with rage as they strike the mountains with blinding white electricity 
As I turn around, the other side of the valley yields clear skies 
Light blue stretches for miles 
The sun breaks through a cloud 
And shines rays which illuminate the sparkling stream 
Turing back once more to the side of the storm 
The mountains remain unmoved 
Unbothered 
The cruel gray skies direct their attacks on the centered mountain 
The rushing creek and crack of thunder compete for my attention 
But all my focus is on the tallest mountain 
Strong 
Solitary 
Serene amongst the chaos 
 
You are my mountain
You are my escape from life's storms
Amidst the chaos your love remains untainted 
Admidst the harshness of this world your love remains stable 
All this to say
I love uou 
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Lauramartin
<div>I stand stationary. A storm approaching.</div><div>The world around me moves.</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>Trapped in a vegetative valley.</div><div>Voluntarily imprisoned by resting mountains and endless sky. Sky.</div><div>Stretching further than eyes can see. Nature.</div><div>Encapsulating more beauty than minds can process.</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>Mountains meet atmosphere in a chilling embrace. They escape harsh winds with thick blankets of untouched snow. Deep emerald evergreens proudly tower in the valley where I stand. Less confident, browning shrubs dot the middle of the mountain range. Plants that chose to bury their seeds at the top weren&rsquo;t so lucky.No life prevails on the unforgiving peaks.&nbsp;</div><div>A powerful stream rushes through the valley.</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>Small yet resilient yellow wildflowers hug the edge of the rushing water. Cherishing its gift of hydration. The clear rapids carry fish-- unwilling hitchhikers-- down the valley without consideration of their desired destination. The dark gray sky twists furiously above. Clouds move with rage as they strike the mountains with blinding white electricity.</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>As I turn around, the other side of the valley yields clear skies. Light blue stretches for miles. The sun breaks through a cloud. And shines rays which illuminate the sparkling stream. Turing back once more to the side of the storm. The mountains remain unmoved. Unbothered.</div><div>The cruel gray skies direct their attacks on the centered mountain.</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>The rushing creek and crack of thunder compete for my attention. But all my focus is on the tallest mountain. Strong. Solitary. Serene amongst the chaos.&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>You are my mountain. You are my escape from life&#39;s storms. Amidst the chaos your love remains untainted. Admidst the harshness of this world your love remains stable. All this to say... I love you.</div>

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