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The world around me Isn't real I'm in an abyss A place where time Is stagnant I hear voices Surround me But I can't speak Nor can I open my eyes I wish to wake up And leave this darkness But I'm stuck Until the monitor Beeps loudly
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savigirl14

I am a very creative person. I love to read, write, sing, dance and act. Poetry to me is a way of self expression that lightens someone's heart. I love white chocolate and my favorite book is Anne of Green Gables

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upnorthdavid
Great, great. Make the mind wonder and wander, make me re-read to find deeper meaning

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