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COME AT ME, WORLD!!!!!!


She lays there with the blood coursing ever so slowly through her veins dying in her agony... atrophy from the antagonizing sorrow of the pain she feels in side... her eyes are glazy and cloudy as they roll back behind her "i can't do this" she coughs as her breaths draw shorter where is that light? that tunnel light that is made to bring her home? she realizes that it's not there... she sees that it's not the time of her passing so she finds the strength inside her... her heart beats a little bit faster... her pain fades into wellness and her strength pics up... her eyes open as the tears fall from her eyes and she rises. she gets up... guns ready and gloves on... watch out world..... if you wanted her down you shoulda kept her there... cause now that she's up and ready... you won't know what hit you......
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Ryean Miles

24 year old Cosmotology student from Phenix City, AL. I'm a mother of a beautiful 5 year old little girl. :)

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use that life experience as a motivation to inspire you and be greater this is an amazing poem took courage to express this particular piece-keep writing it wasn't your time to go-great job

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