A Comet across Night's Sky.

May 9, 2020

Like a comet that illuminates the night I illuminate my darkness when I write. Lacking much, I still have a plan- so I do what I must and all that I can through which, hidden riches I abundantly own- they come rushing forth in each new poem!

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Annette M VelasquezJul 1, 2020

I am glad that you can relate, this is just how I feel about writing! It is a catharsis, illuminating, and pierces the darkness...

Annette M VelasquezJul 1, 2020

I am glad that you can relate, this is just how I feel about writing! It is a catharsis, illuminating, and pierces the darkness...

SpinjanebobJul 1, 2020

I can relate to this so much felt like u wrote it specifically for me.

Annette M VelasquezMay 16, 2020

Thank you for your critique of my " comet" poem. As I mentioned, it is an older one. Yes, poetry does come as a comet, in a rush sometimes- and I do share it with everyone.

gvall123May 16, 2020

<p>While nothing come the night ,the morn will spring a line in my mind and the verse takes shape,,</p><p>You have a poem come rushing to you,,,so it must be be for all of us I would like to think,,,</p>

Annette M VelasquezMay 9, 2020

More of my very early poetry- from my teens. Note the simplicity, so very different from my current multi-dimensional writing.