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Coming Away


Coming away from the luck in the valley, I see an image struck by lightning. Coming away the picture floats, Away in the dreamy breeze. Water for a friend who's love ends; His roots are drowning in trust. Coming away his heart hears nothing. Coming away my dream has passed. Coming away the snow falls the rain falls; A climate worth leaving for. Coming away The time is unknown and blue; Smart ticks ruin my mind in a spiff. A memory no more hidden in front of the eye, To have a thought ruined by insecurity. Coming away my independence passes. Coming away my independence stays. Coming away a storm comes thundering; A realistic dream stuck in the ground. Coming away being in love lurks. Where does it stand underneath this cover up? That is it in the tree high looking down. Beautiful and strong this journey ends, Coming away he swoops me off my feet.
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