Commitment
Its red and beating,
Filled with scars
Drawn by words and deed
Of people thoughtless and uncaring
Yet those by those who care are worst
For those they cut so deep
Endlessly dripping red drops of blood
Tears running down my face
Is this how you show you care?
I’d rather you don’t
Your care bites and hits
Hurts, scratches and scares
If this is, what care is
I’d rather not
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