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Like a flood after a drought Because everything needs water Like shoes when you have none Because your feet are sore from walking Like a love when you just wanted a friend Because now you have so much more Like a dance with no music Cause there’s nothing specific that you move Like an empty page filled with memories Because everything will be fulfilled Like words with no beat So what you say seems real Like love with no hurt Because then you'd really know Like an abandoned kitten in a new home Cause now you have somewhere you can go Like an empty cupboard filled with food Because now this empty feeling is going Like a balloon blown up until it pops Cause this feeling inside is showing. You make my heart smile.
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kristasciple
<p>Care to enlighten me on why it is so &quot;gay&quot; or is that just you being childish? If you are going to be so crude the least you could do with all the spare time you have is give a comment on how to transform the poem into something better. Apologies if it is not for your taste, but then maybe you should look in the right category instead of rummaging blindly through anything you come across and being a child.&nbsp;</p>
Hot Rod
<p>gay</p>

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