Concord Not Feathers
I started on the ground
With wings and a push, I took a leap of faith
Aided by tender, warm breezes, I soared
Once I became strong and wise, I looked down on many
When wings grew tired, and muscles weak
I started a long fall back down. As the youthful passed me on their way up
Their shiny feathers gleaming next to my fading plumage
I knew they had not felt air that I had, and that they might never
My descent continued, the ground growing closer, all life drawn away from me
At last. Back on the ground
My eyes slowly shut and I rose far above the top
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