<*>Confusion Empire^*^

Fri, 08/10/2012 - 04:15 -- cbell93

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29445
United States
33° 0' 9.4068" N, 79° 59' 51.3312" W

Confusion…….
Nine letters mixed together
Not one idea of weather
It was wrong or right
Every night
Has been silent since
The feeling surrounds me like a fence
Closing in ever so slightly
Nightly
The hour plays over in my head
Of every word said
Breaking each other’s chains
Of mixed abounded veins
That once twined hand and hand
That formed a band
That was once thought to be inseparable
Confusion rules the night
But as much as I fight
I stand no ground
To it relentless pound
I only wish to steal your pain
And remove the rain
That pours down your check
So that you can make it to your peak
Peter 4:8……
“Above all love each other deeply”
Everyone has a fear of depth
Because the thought of theft
Of the mind body and sole
Fearless I am not
I set out to sought
Love
I found it in the form of a dove
That flew out of my reach
Opposite of the leach
The girl I once knew
Set off and flew
Out of my life
Faster than the knife
That struck my most precious muscle
Confusion compare to a trestle
Two metal bars set off into never-ending nothingness
Haunted by past bliss
We have come to a fork
Both roads foreshadow a spiraling quark
With no knowledge of what lays ahead
One hint it is said
That all roads connect
Maybe in the brink of disappointment
We will come across an advertisement
Of each other down the way
Moments upon reconnecting
Mind fumbling the right collection
Of words to say
Or is this just a portrayal of a bay
Of denial to meet
Will it become a retreat
Am I sane
Or is this only rain
Dismembering my vision to see clear
Of what our future will hold
Will it be a path of gold
Or a pool of misery
The fear of the unknown
Cannot be expressed in one zone
I don’t know which way to turn
Is our love a fern
Or a plain rose
That in time can be froze
And shipped off to the next
Couple that has a complex
Story to tell

Comments

jwiener

This is an amazing poem. You do a great job of making the reader really understand the painful and confused emotions you are going through. The lines "I found it in the form of a dove / That flew out of my reach" spoke to me the most because a dove is a symbol of peace and love and the image of the dove flying away from you was a great representation of that peace and love falloing away from your relationship.

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