Cool Breeze
Heart racing. Head pounding. Body shaking. Legs aching. I can't stop. Keep moving. I drop. Dry heaving. I can't breath. Can you feel it? Cool breeze. I can feel it. Get up. Try to run. Fall down. Body stunned. Heart racing. Head pounding. Body shaking. Legs aching. Heart stops. Head drops. Body still. Can't feel. Can't breath. Can you feel it? Cool breeze? I don't feel it. I'm dying. I'm flying... Can you feel it? Cool breeze. I can feel it. I can breath. Heart racing. Head pounding. Body shaking. Legs aching. Get up. Try to run. I'm up. I'm not done. WON'T stop. Keep moving. WON'T drop. I'm thriving. Heart racing. Head pounding. Body shaking. Legs aching. Can you feel it? Cool breeze. I can feel it. I can BREATH!
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