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cool breeze


The cool breeze of freedom
I got tired of writing about nothing ness cuz to be real I've been done wrong to soo many times I should never do any one right I just held on to too many dreams I've been blind by wat I thought was light I just assumed it to be alright ... ...see I just spilled some of the true me and were I've been recently into this here poem ...its just filled with true ness ...instead of being like the others that r filled with nothing but wishful bliss...I done been so wronged  I could write 12 thousand songs...so many ways so many different views but falling from the sky is falling from the sky cuz its from the bottom that I came just to get to u...but as I sat there by ur side enjoying the view I fell from ur grasp but I ain't had to worry u replaced me in a few ... a slothful slumber...my emotions moved about in me like soft slow rolling thunder...but I let none hear my cry then u say I did wrong to u like I was the bad guy ...hush up don't tell that lie ...crocodile tears more faker than that pseudo love u showed me ...crocodile tears well I tell u what y u cry cry me a river so I can go ahead on my gondola and get rowed from the peace...back on the trail to my happiness
                Sincerely
                     Sublime NSK
P.S - don't u worry about me and don't come  back to me like that piece of food as a child u use to hid in ur mouth cuz once u "bite" and "chew" me you can "swallow all of me" or you can just "spit" me out"(no sexual references intended)
 

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