Counting the Hard Way

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I say One.

You say Fun.

I say Two.

You say "Who?"

I say Three.

You say Me.

I say Four.

You ask for More.

I say Five.

You just Jive.

I say Six.

You make Clicks.

I say Seven.

You reject Heaven.

I say Eight.

You then Hate.

I say Nine.

You say "Mine!"

You say Ten.

I say The End.

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