Critical
We are so critical
of others
why can't seem to love one another
look past our imperfections
when there is beauty in all of us
no magnifying glass needed to detect it
Family dinners discussing other people's lives
when we can't seem to steer the ship we call life
Look into the eyes of those hurting
words we say our like poison
seeping into the skin of those we don't know
what road and how far they have to go
in the gas tank of life
it could be on empty
lifting up others should be more tempting
than using harsh words that are unforgiving
the world we live in can be critical
as one we show others that life is worth living for
not to be judged by religion, skin tone, or any guidelines
be team players no one sitting on the sidelines
be someone's reason worth living
less critical in a world so unforgiving
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