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Critical


We are so critical of others why can't seem to love one another look past our imperfections when there is beauty in all of us no magnifying glass needed to detect it Family dinners discussing other people's lives when we can't seem to steer the ship we call life Look into the eyes of those hurting words we say our like poison seeping into the skin of those we don't know what road and how far they have to go in the gas tank of life it could be on empty lifting up others should be more tempting than using harsh words that are unforgiving the world we live in can be critical as one we show others that life is worth living for not to be judged by religion, skin tone, or any guidelines be team players no one sitting on the sidelines be someone's reason worth living less critical in a world so unforgiving
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