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Barely passing through wind at 5 miles a hour
everythings is concrete, rigged and sour
Extreme weather under the beginning poets poem
clashing into the giant glaciers ice cold solstice
ironically it's hot as hell in the boat that I coast in
so it's either freeze or burn, no in between, no regularity
nothing familiar to conceptualize my integrity
all this opportunity to do what I want, when I want, how I want
i can blast my r&b, walk around in the nude and not do anything
freely having this girl and that one come to my open field and play ball
or walk around and avoid opportunities that has my future involved
but the best thing about me being me is, I have never been one to stall
to keep from reaching that highest pedistal of them all and ringing that victory bell until I hear birds call
until i wreak of enjoyment and success,
until I breathe my last breath,
I will hustle and work, until the day I fall.
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