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Criticism by the Law


They beat me , Put a bag over my head as if I was not part of the land . They threw shade on my background , Because I been mental challenge by teens , Aswell as men . Wool skin they yelled and laughed . Tears fell down as they walk past each sell at night . Tapping in pretending they was concern, But they was not , They all ways set as bi racial objections , Of concreted grounded blessings. I was not Mayweather, But I was prepared for any weather ! Not knowing what was said behind close doors ! Did I care to think ? No ! My housing and my kids was important to me ! The finicials was destroying us all, They not pawn chips or no was I the DHS prostitute they made millions off us ,n are cases but I still didn't receive housing out of all completed case plans Why?? Earn a doller , make a doller the legal way cause I wanted Them handcuffs off me man ! I cried in them cold sells , Begging the ward to let me free , My time was credit , And my children was paying people credits ties and all . Criticized and judge , Because I wanted welfare ,medical An i wanted a job for Rent and Bill's and to take care of my kids and to be real to the struggle . But instead! I took in criticism by the law! Can you blame me for obeying the orders of the Ward! But disobeying the law? Cause the law judge me as a single parent and a nothing ass baby daddy ?? Umm? Probably cause your no different then them , but who are you to judge me ? You not perfect , O you perfect Conflicted Your con- ing the rules of the Law , This seem more 48 than custody to me ?? Ask yourself that ?? Mommas baby daddy's pay me in respect ! So in my defense you can keep your Criticism by the Law , And your money an cherish the wagging . Cause this my law n I refuse to let you judge me , off what's already been verified , Pasting time Why when I'm directing you a position that's clearly undertaken in the wrong direction , But instead you call your enforcement. And I got criticism by the law Because of my background! How dare you ppl of culture??
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Mama noochie 89

I love poetry I been written for over 18 years I always put my feelings in my written family struggles street violence, Physical assaults in Relations etc , Also sexual assailts it took me hard to grow out so I wrote yo heel me , in every situation alot of community street stuff when It all said and done I was never happy . Regardless I'm going to be heard rather you like it or not I'm me and I have A few words to get out to teens in violence destructive homes Relations and also differences in family values understand I been there alot of plenty of situation in alot of ways I'm not perfect but I want you to feel perfect when you read n feel my Pressure@@!! It was real !!

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